Today, some of us are entering a writing competition, where we had to describe in 50 words a hiding place for a precious treasure titled” The Diamond of Drury Lane.”  It was difficult to condense it and still include the descriptions we needed. See what you think! 

Kieran’s Hidden Treasure

Under the football pitch the treasure lay ,lasers in the mud guarding it with an a alarm. If the thief gets past the lasers, then they would have to make progress on the impossible eye and index finger scanner, on the side of the safe - but only when the team was away!

My treasure is hidden on a sandy beach, on the Lost Island. It is hidden under big black boulders covered in moss, noone can get in because there is a secret box, it gives you an electric shock if you try and break in. Noone ever dared to break in.

Hello,  this is us! Primary 7K/S.We’re in Carronshore Primary in Scotland. We are very excited because we are learning to blog this year.We hope to  be learning a lot about blogging  and let you see what we will be doing.